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Hi RK,

Hope you don't mind me invading your personal space.

Thanks for review of my 60 word effort. I would ask however that if you choose to review anything of mine in future, you attempt to be slightly more constructive. Simply tearing holes in someones work does very little for their development as a writer.

I was fully aware that my work was unoriginally themed. I was attempting to link two stories together - whether or not I was successful is really unimportant. Im learning every step of the way.

Thanks again.

|PeterFW

I had hoped that I was being constructive. The middle of your short story was unnecessary and needed something to make it stand out from the crowd.
I look forward to reading more of your work.

RK

Thanks RK

I am not usually that sensitive!

Please dont hold back next time!