h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Hi Big Al
I've just finished subbing "17th Century Flags" A14031910

It's a complete rewrite from the PR thread, listed in chronological order with subheaders, and I welcome your thoughts before I return it to the Eds.

I've retitled it as you suggested.

Phew.

What do you think?

I want to put the last bit in a bulleted list, but that will have to be tomorrow now.

Yes, it's reading quite well now GB

Thanks

Bulleted list do you know how to do the bulleted list within a bulleted list?

Like: bullet-point then a blank bullet point then onto the next colour start with a bullet point

I've been looking but can't find one to copy the Guide ML

'fraid not

No worries

Thanks for the read-through

It's done, what do you think?

Looks good to me, GB

Only one minor point Coat odf Arms is written with initiaol capitals in one place, and all lower case in another. I suspect it should be written with initial capitals.

Good work GB

Do you mean "Coat of Arms" throughout the Entry?

If you do I'll attend to that tomorrow before I return it

It's all polished now, "colnel" was "Colonel" and the regiment I couldn't find - turned out to be an extinct hunting hound.

I've added links to EGEs and the author is very happy with the polished Entry.

'Do you mean "Coat of Arms" throughout the Entry? '

Yes.

Good job, I'd already returned it

A13900042
My collaborate entry on Whaling has been given a BLOB this morning and it's now pending.
Congrats, fellow author

GB.

Looks good

Would you mind giving your to the Pterosaur entry in PR?

I'll give it a look this weekend.