h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Jenni,

Could you take a look at 'Your Warm July V3' for me. I have broken the verse down as you suggested. Would like a view on how it now reads and weather it has lost or gained.

Many thanks

Kev

Hi Kev,

Just up with a little killer headache (was worth it though!), and thanks for your little note. Has brought me down to earth after the last 24 hrs or so. Shows what this place is really for - the honing of skills, aiding each other, friendship and enhancing our writing skills.
I will have a look and cmmment, as now see this as the little magic piece with specialness. Will be about in couple of days time. Going to catch the last of summer in that 'Village o the Doorstep'!
Later, Sir!
Jen