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Wyatt Started conversation Nov 2, 2006


A16890375 All Subbed, and waiting for your approval! smiley - cheers

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JulesK Posted Nov 3, 2006

Hi,

Thanks for coming by to give me the opportunity to look smiley - ok

I found this: owners's which has an unnecessary s after the apostrophe.

There's also a sentence which I feel read better before:

The streets of this area in Newport are Bellevue Avenue, Ochre Point Avenue and Ocean Drive - all are wide, tree-lined avenues.

I preferred the original but it's up to you. You will have had your reasons for changing it.

Thanks for your time on this smiley - biggrin

Julessmiley - smiley

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Wyatt Posted Nov 3, 2006


Changed back and sent in. smiley - ok

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