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Post 1

BLACKPOOLFC

Here`s Me wanting to be a best selling author, , And this is a poem writien by My 11yr old son Benjamin. I read this and wept at the thought He could pen such. And I can only aspire to putting such thoughts into words.

Benjamin I love You loads.....Here`s Your first ever public preview.....

MAY.


Month of growth, Blossoms bloom in the vague red sun.

Spiders web hung with crstal dew, tulips reveal their dew drop diamonds.

Yet silence is hung acros the field but only the wind in the willows can be heard down by the stream.

Yet may has only bloomed it`s first flowers


stil there is more to come.


By Benjamin Platt aged 11.


Benjamin.

Post 2

~~Insomniac.Vampire~~

Hi Ben,

You are more like your Dad than you know smiley - biggrin Understandible you dont like football though, (nobody can blame you for that)! lol smiley - wowYour poem is great! How long did that take you? Your Dads going to have to work especially hard to keep up to your high literary standards isnt he! Keep up the good work wont you smiley - smiley

Take care, T.

smiley - fullmoon


Benjamin.

Post 3

stoopid cupid

hiya benjamin (or if dad isnt looking *ben*)


read your poem, thought it was lovely........ keep up the good work!....will keep and eye out for more of it, or you can always e.mail me your poems.......love christina
smiley - hug


Benjamin.

Post 4

BLACKPOOLFC

Hi Christina, Hello Teresa, Thanks 4 the nice stuff you said about my poems. Here`s `s some more great poetry 4 U.

The government has no right at all
to come and dig up my garden wall.
Tony Blair is an absloot twit.
He should hide himself in a very deep pit.

love Ben Platt.


Benjamin.

Post 5

~~Insomniac.Vampire~~

Hello Ben,

So Dad give you the keyboard for 5 minutes? smiley - laugh
Very good, your little political limerick, i think he would have plenty of offers for somebody to dig that pit eh? smiley - winkeye
Are you and your Brother enjoying your holiday? Have you any plans to do anything fun this week?smiley - biggrin

Take care you guys, T smiley - smiley


smiley - fullmoon


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