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Benjamin.
BLACKPOOLFC Started conversation May 9, 2004
Here`s Me wanting to be a best selling author, , And this is a poem writien by My 11yr old son Benjamin. I read this and wept at the thought He could pen such. And I can only aspire to putting such thoughts into words.
Benjamin I love You loads.....Here`s Your first ever public preview.....
MAY.
Month of growth, Blossoms bloom in the vague red sun.
Spiders web hung with crstal dew, tulips reveal their dew drop diamonds.
Yet silence is hung acros the field but only the wind in the willows can be heard down by the stream.
Yet may has only bloomed it`s first flowers
stil there is more to come.
By Benjamin Platt aged 11.
Benjamin.
~~Insomniac.Vampire~~ Posted May 10, 2004
Hi Ben,
You are more like your Dad than you know Understandible you dont like football though, (nobody can blame you for that)! lol Your poem is great! How long did that take you? Your Dads going to have to work especially hard to keep up to your high literary standards isnt he! Keep up the good work wont you
Take care, T.
Benjamin.
stoopid cupid Posted May 13, 2004
hiya benjamin (or if dad isnt looking *ben*)
read your poem, thought it was lovely........ keep up the good work!....will keep and eye out for more of it, or you can always e.mail me your poems.......love christina
Benjamin.
BLACKPOOLFC Posted May 25, 2004
Hi Christina, Hello Teresa, Thanks 4 the nice stuff you said about my poems. Here`s `s some more great poetry 4 U.
The government has no right at all
to come and dig up my garden wall.
Tony Blair is an absloot twit.
He should hide himself in a very deep pit.
love Ben Platt.
Benjamin.
~~Insomniac.Vampire~~ Posted May 25, 2004
Hello Ben,
So Dad give you the keyboard for 5 minutes?
Very good, your little political limerick, i think he would have plenty of offers for somebody to dig that pit eh?
Are you and your Brother enjoying your holiday? Have you any plans to do anything fun this week?
Take care you guys, T
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