h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Hi there,

I'm just starting a University Project on Whisky...

Don't worry, I'm not looking for a sub-ed (yet).

But I just need an expert to look over the GML on the first page I've done. Everything works ok, I've yet to put the links in, but the problem I've got is that I've written up one page to start with, and am going to clone it about 120 times!!

I think I'm stretching the use of tables a little for approved GML, so I just wanted to know if everything I've done here is alright for the edited guide before I start writing the rest and have to change 120 pages later on.

The page is at:
http://www.bbc.co.uk/h2g2/guide/A663392

Could you please have a quick look and tell me if it'll pass as far as format goes for approved GML?

Thanks
Whisky

Sorry for the delay... busy, busy weekend, but I'm back online for a bit now.

I'm not 100 percent sure what you are trying to do at the top there. It looked a bit odd and out of kilter.

The rest looks fine.

However it seems to be a bit stiff to me. I'd like to see more text explaining things in addition to the tables.

In my Messier Objects entry I used an unordered list instead of a table http://www.bbc.co.uk/h2g2/guide/A480502 and I think the result was a bit more user friendly.

But I think you're off to a fine start here. Good luck with it!



- X

Thanks,

Don't worry, there's a lot more information to go into each page yet. It's just I was worried about the "accepability" of the GML


whisky