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Hello ubernorman

I've got your wonderful entry to sub-edit, so if you'd like to go subscribe (so the conversations when it goes live will appear on your Personal Space) to the soon-to-be-edited version which you'll find here: A13996290
then we can start discussing the entry!

The link you provided to "boules" was unedited so not allowed, so I've changed it to "cricket" - is that alright?

Galaxy Babe
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Are you happy with the title? I was thinking of something a little more descriptive that'll show up in more searches, perhaps:

Gin and Bitter Lemon - the Moreish GBL

or

Gin and Bitter Lemon - Tall, Tasty and Refreshing

??

Hi, unfortunately I can't get any new articles to sub until I return the ones I already have. If you have any comments, could you make them now please? Thanks.

I'm sorry I'm going to have to return it now, so I can get more work to sub-edit.

If you have any disagreements with my alterations please post here and I'll get them changed at Editorial Feedback.

with your next article and see you on the Front Page!

Galaxy Babe
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hi and sorry for not responding. been a very busy boy of late. your suggestions sound absolutely fine. any mention of cricket gets the thumbs up from me. i like 'tall tasy and refreshing' as a title although anything would do.

thanks again. i'll try and be a little more responsive.

cheers

No worries

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I'm so pleased you're a cricket fan *phew* and didn't mind the little title tweak

See you on the Front Page!