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Post 1

jqr

Hi there. You are the editor for my guide entry, and as I was looking over your version, I found a couple of quite minor spelling mistakes. Is there any way you can fix them before it ends up in the guide?

The sentence in the 4th paragraph of the History section that begins, "Ironically," is missing the word "that" near the end--"a process *that* is known as gentrification."

In the next paragraph, there should be a comma after Satmar sect to make it parallel with "Puerto Ricans" and "Italians".

There should be a period at the end of the "Subway" paragraph in the transportation section.

Thanks so much for looking at my work!


A412507 Williamsburg, Brooklyn, NY

Post 2

Peregrin

OK, I'll get it changed. Great article by the way - informative and interesting, just what we're looking for - sorry I missed those mistakes!


A412507 Williamsburg, Brooklyn, NY

Post 3

jqr

Thanks for the compliments! smiley - smileysmiley - smiley


A412507 Williamsburg, Brooklyn, NY

Post 4

jqr

I tried to open up to read the guide entry again but there is an XML parsing error or some such. I think one of the accent marks was spelled wrong. Just thought I'd let you know. smiley - smiley


A412507 Williamsburg, Brooklyn, NY

Post 5

Peregrin

Thanks - I don't know how that slipped by. I'll let the technical powers know.


A412507 Williamsburg, Brooklyn, NY

Post 6

jqr

Thanks again. smiley - smiley


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