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Subbing "Lead Training"

Post 1

Gnomon - time to move on

Hi Mina!

I'm subbing Lead Training Your Dog at A29779249. I still have to add a few links, but other than that I'm more or less finished.

But this Entry ends on a very negative note and is really crying out for a positive concluding paragraph. Would you like to write one?


Subbing "Lead Training"

Post 2

Mina

That was my disgust that I couldn't link to the big rescue centres because they use a method that doesn't actually work.

Bearing in mind our discussion that I can't write conclusions, what sort of thing should I put in it for this entry?


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Post 3

Gnomon - time to move on

It should repeat the more positive things that have already been said in the entry, and end with an exhortation to get out there and train those dogs!


Subbing "Lead Training"

Post 4

Mina

I'll have a go - probably won't be today because J is back at school (finally!) and I've got to do all those important things I've not done while he's been around, but will get to it asap.


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Post 5

Gnomon - time to move on

smiley - ok


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