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A3103787: Mass transit travel in Salt Lake City, Utah

Post 1

Lbclaire

Hi Marv,

I'm the sub on the mass transit entry, written by GDZ and yourself. I've finished working on it now, so please could you take a look at it and let me know what you think? I've generally Anglicised it a little, expanded on the Introduction and added some stuff from the UTA website. Also, there were a few facts which were different on the UTA website (eg. the number of children per adult who could travel free). I've changed these, but I'm well aware that websites are often out of date and there may be a difference between the official version and what happens in day-to-day use, so do let me know if any of my changes are incorrect smiley - ok.

I'm copying this to GDZ too, of course.

smiley - smiley Claire


A3103787: Mass transit travel in Salt Lake City, Utah

Post 2

Lbclaire

Helloooo... anybody there? smiley - winkeye


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marvthegrate LtG KEA

Oh, heya, sorry I missed this in the noise that is my convo list.

Thanks for the edit. I will be sure to point GDZ to it, as this is his baby.

marv


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Post 4

Lbclaire

OK, thanks Marv. I'd like to get this back to the Editors ASAP.

smiley - smiley


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