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Sub editing: Algorithms

Post 1

Researcher PSG

Hello
I am the writer of the entry on Algorithms that you have to sub ed. Sorry smiley - smiley

Erm, I'm just popping by to say hello, and to ask a favour. My entry was recommended and packed off to a sub ed before I had chance to do some last minute corrections. So if you could hold off finishing for a couple of days and check out the original entry for the corrections.

Thanks

Researcher PSG


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Post 2

Snowman - For a story click my name you know you want to

Are you doing the corrections at the mo? If so could you tell me when you've done them.

Snowman smiley - snowman


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Post 3

Researcher PSG

Well, the situation is this. I have done all the corrections but I'm still trying to get the new section to sound right. If you want to take a look and make suggestions or ask questions I'd be grateful.

Researcher PSG


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Post 4

Researcher PSG

it's at:
A589854


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Post 5

Snowman - For a story click my name you know you want to

Where it says:
8. Rub hands against each other
9. Turn off water
wouldn't it be better to add between the two
remove hands from under tap smiley - huh

Snowman smiley - snowman


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Post 6

Researcher PSG

Probably, that is one of the things I inherited from Dancer.

Researcher PSG


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Post 7

Researcher PSG

Right I have reworked the new section on what can be classed as actions. I think it's up to code now but if you read it over and it doesn't seem clear enough I'll be happy to make any additions to it.

Over to you.

Researcher PSG


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