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Magwitch - My name is Mags and I am funky.

Hi FS,

I'm your sub ed for The Virginia Reel (disco) the new one is here A87802013 so don't forget to subscribe.smiley - ok

Just given it a quick read through. The instructions are very clear (heck even I know how to do si do)

Only the question at the mo, should it be mentioned that the men are on one side and the women on the other? In the 'Opening Moves' section, perhaps just after

'Both sides start by forming a line about 1 metre (or yard) apart,' smiley - biro men form one line, women form the othersmiley - orib

Just a thought.

Other than that, I'm going to have me work cut out looking for linkys smiley - winkeye

I wish I had a partner dance with and try it out.


Mags


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Florida Sailor All is well with the world

Good to see you on this Magssmiley - biggrin


>'Both sides start by forming a line about 1 metre (or yard) apart,' men form one line, women form the other


Good additionsmiley - ok

The one other niggle I spotted is my ownsmiley - facepalm

>The two lines approach the centre of the floor

Should be the 'centre of the space between the lines.'

Obviously, if there are several lines only might be able to reach the 'centre of the floor'

smiley - cheers
F smiley - dolphin S


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Magwitch - My name is Mags and I am funky.

I was *sure* I'd posted yesterday, mind you I was faffing about with several different things at the same time and I *was* in Pliny smiley - facepalm

What I was going to say was, I made those changessmiley - ok.

Also, I was wondering whether the Caller says the bits *after* the hyphen in the Opening Moves section and, if so, whether or not they should be italised to make then stand out a bit. I've done the first one, just as an example. If you like it then I can do all of them, if you don't I can remove it in a trice.

Mags


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Post 4

Florida Sailor All is well with the world

The caller says both sides of the instruction, the first tells who should do the move, the second half what move to do., perhaps both sides should be in italics?

I also noticed that, at least once I changed from a hyphen to full stop ('Head couple only. ') We should probably make them all consistant.

Thanks

F smiley - dolphin S


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Post 5

Magwitch - My name is Mags and I am funky.

(cool)

I've added those italics and changed that pesky comma to a dash smiley - winkeye

I'll have a scout about and look and see if I can find any linkys, but I'm not that hopeful.

Mags


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Post 6

Magwitch - My name is Mags and I am funky.

I couldn't find any additional linkys for this and I really tried to find *something* at least. smiley - rofl

If you're happy with this, then so am I smiley - ok

Mags


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Post 7

Florida Sailor All is well with the world

Line Dancing A669512

Although I disprove its basic premise smiley - shrug

American High School Dances A6083804

Might be appropriate in the sidebar, I remember one of the comments in PR mentioned a school dance.

If you want to add either of these that is fine, otherwise push the shiny button.

F smiley - dolphin S


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