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Rashomon

Post 1

The Researcher formally known as Dr St Justin

Hi, Singing Badger!

I've been subbing your entry (A1170578), and I think I've just about finished. There's only one thing I'm not entirely happy with - both the sections 'The Moral of Rashomon' and 'Philosophy' start by saying 'The moral of Rashomon is that truth is relative.'

To me, this seems a bit repetitious - and if I were just casually reading the entry, I'd be inclined to skip over the second section, as it just seem to be a repetition.

I'd like to remove it from one of the sections, but this will obviously mean reworking some of the text, and I'd value your input...

smiley - angelsmiley - doctorJ


Rashomon

Post 2

thesingingbadger

Hi Dr Justin,

Sorry if this doesn't come up under my usual user name, I've been having login problems. But anyway, I'd recommend changing the first instance of the repeated phrase into something like "At the end of film, it is impossible to know who what the truth is." That oughta fix it.

Hope this helps,

TSBsmiley - smiley


Rashomon

Post 3

thesingingbadger

Damn! Always re-read before posting!! I should have written "...it is impossible to know who is telling the truth". Sorry 'bout dat.smiley - blush


Rashomon

Post 4

The Researcher formally known as Dr St Justin

smiley - ok Excellent stuff

I'll give the entry read-through or two, and then send it back to the Editors, unless there's anything you're not happy with?


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