h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Hi

For my sins, I've been assigned the task of sub-editing your entry for inclusion in the Edited Guide.

In the main, I've just done a little tidying-up to fit in with the house style (not that it needed much anyway) and substituted one or two words to avoid repetition.

I changed the phrase '...another run-in with Doctor Who' to '...another run-in with the Doctor' as the latter is the character's name, whereas the former is the title of the series in which he appears.

I thought I'd do you the courtesy of asking for any feedback, before I send it back to the editorial team. Please tell me if I've changed anything that alters your intended meaning and I'll do my best to correct it.

It was a very informative, well-written piece and I much enjoyed editing it!

Cheers

Of course, I forgot the quick link to the edited version! A3094391.

Kelvin,

Please visit Geggs' personal space (U201647) for a conversation on this entry. He's given me some more info that I've added to the piece, but he (and I) would be grateful for your views.

Cheers

Kelvin,

I'm sorry, but as Geggs has given his approval, I've been advised to return this to the Editors a.s.a.p.

If, when you read the piece, you have any problems with it, you can still use the Editorial feedback process.

Regards,