h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

I like it, I like it VERY much. Kind of post-modern, with all the characters from different films and books intertwining. BRAVE to write all ten doctors, I have trouble with the one. Though I’m wondering where on earth you got the idea from! It sounds like the sort of thing I’d think of after consuming obscene amounts of sugar, not that it’s a bad thing, original is good after all. The use of Time lady though? Maybe it should just be Time Lord. My in-depth knowledge of Doctor who is a little lacking though. May I suggest cutting out rose? I know she’s important but to me she’s always felt unnecessary, just a thought. Though the Doctor crying in chapter two makes me uncomfortable!

I respect your opinion and yes I have been on the sugar (dairy milk *drool*) but you have to understand that the Doctor has just lost his entire race and yes I know the Doctor never cries but in a way it humanises him. I to think Rose is unnessesery but she's quite useful to use as a damsel in distress, see chapter four! The only reason I made the Doctor cry is because I was experimenting with different emotions to use and obviously the crying hasn't worked and in chapter four I use the Doctor's conscience as leverage for Marvin.

I didn't mean it as an insult, honest! I've read all six chapters. I understand why you did what you did, it is your work after all!

I don't take it as an insult! Personally I love bit of constructive critisism. (Bet I've spelt that wrong!)

I wouldn't worry! I wont notice anyway