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Joe C
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"longest hit ever hit in Wrigley" doesn't read as well as it could, I think Perhaps "the longest ball every hit in Wrigley"

Or 'ever' even.

I can't even make my corrections right

I've started work on it now - I'll highlight the changes I make and draw your attention to them.

I find it mildy amusing that Jimi, being a credited author, is the Recommending Scout for this entry

Joe

Was I?

Well, what can I say. I recognise quality when I see it!

I'm checking through according to my list at A1342090.

All the links are fine

I noticed, but didn't point it out to anyone, because I liked it

'This is the dark day in this town since they shot John Kennedy.'

Should that read 'darkest'?

Apart from that, I think it's almost EG-ready

Actually, it should say darkest and Jack Kennedy instead of John .

OK, I'm going to give you all a couple of days to give it a last check over to make sure we haven't missed anything, and then I'll send it back

JoeC

Nothing? OK, I'll return it now.

Thanks - this has been a nice easy one for me to do

JoeC