h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Hi Jaez!

I've subedited your entry on Islam!

I'm going to return it to the editors soon so it can move on to the next stage of becoming part of the Edited Guide. If you'd like to check it for any mistakes before I send it (at which point, any mistakes in it become less easy to change) then the edited version of the entry is at A952832.

My main changes were:
- Adding and renaming headers
- Changing the construction of some sentences
- Using the most commonly-used English spellings of Arabic words
- Creating a bulleted list of the Five Pillars of Islam
- Moving some text into footnotes
- Grouping some sentences into paragraphs
- Adding a sentence on "umma" to the end of the article

If you find have any comments, find any mistakes or have anything that you'd like me to change, please post them here!

I hope you like my changes
RhoMuNuQ

I've also changed the title to "Islam - an introduction"

RhoMuNuQ

I've returned it today!

If you'd like any changes to be made, please post them here and I'll pass them on to the Editors for consideration. Your entry should appear on the <./>FrontPage</.> soon, at which point it will be officially edited.

RhoMuNuQ

It appeared on the Front Page today and there are some comments at F113041?thread=It appeared on the Front Page today and there are some comments at F113041. RhoMuNuQ

I can't believe I didn't say this before, h2g2 is still a bit confusing for me, being a beginner and all, but ... Thank You.



J

No problem - I'm glad you liked the editing.

Well done on getting the entry into the Edited Guide!

RhoMuNuQ