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Serephina Started conversation Nov 25, 2005
cool! 
Though can I make a couple of suugestions? Itd maybe look better without SHODAN in caps, use the italics tag around it if you feel it should stand out from the other text, Annonymous=anonymous 
other than that a couple of things could be phrased better but its loking really good!
if its not ready for peer review how about writing workshop to finish it off?
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Ged42 Posted Nov 25, 2005
I've still got to finish it off, and run it through a spell checker
We'll see how it looks after that and decide what to do with it
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Serephina Posted Nov 25, 2005
Its not the spelling etc as much as the format that probably needs tweaking but ok 
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Serephina Posted Nov 26, 2005
Looking again I really like it and want to play the games now !
Stick it iin a review forum quick, doesnt matter if its not quite inished you can see what people think n do it there, even peer review are gentle on a first entry.
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Serephina Posted Nov 26, 2005
Yay!
Trust me it'll be fine.
Did you say it was your first?
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