h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Hi David I've subbed your entry on Cy Coleman, which can be found @ A3868608. If you wouldn't mind, I'd appreciate it if you could look over what I've changed (just a few grammatical nit-picky things really) and let me know if there's anything you take issue with.

It was a pleasure to read your entry - I take an interest in the music of musical theatre, seeing as I have largely experienced the genre from the orchestra pit.

Oh - and I dislike the musical Cats as well.

Thanks. Looks great. Just three small nitpicks...

'Sweet Charity' needs to be italicised in the first paragraph of the 'Popular Song' bit.

'Wildcat' needs to be italicised in the third paragraph of the 'Broadway' bit (the paragraph about 'Little Me').

The sentence 'Sweet Charity (1966) was Cy Coleman's first hit show, and thus far the only one of his stage shows to be filled' in the paragraph about Sweet Charity, is meant to end with 'filmed' rather than 'filled' (my mistake I think!). So 'Sweet Charity (1966) was Cy Coleman's first hit show, and thus far the only one of his stage shows to be filmed'

When I've done shows I haven't often had a chance to get to know the orchestra (you often end up with three camps - cast, crew and orchestra - which rarely intersect), but I always admire the work they put in to a show.

Thanks for subbing the entry.

David

Thanks for the nitpicks. It's going back to the Eds now...