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Subbing Angry Birds
Lanzababy - Guide Editor Started conversation May 8, 2013
Hi Geggs
I've completed subbing your entry, apart from one query about this phrase
>> Obi-Wan Kenobi, who has a force push power.<<
could you explain force push power to me please? I only played this game on facebook for a while.
If you care to proof read the subbed version it is here, A87793924 There was little to do to it apart from minor typos and a bit of grammar here and there.
cheers
Lanzababy
Subbing Angry Birds
Geggs Posted May 8, 2013
Hmm. Perhaps calling it a Jedi force push power would make it clearer. It's from the Star Wars films - Jedis can make things near them fall over or get pushed backwards merely by waving a hand, and not actually touching them at all.
In the game this works by touching some blocks near to the black bird. The blocks will then fly off as if they are being pushed away from the point were the screen was touched, or clicked in the case of a mouse being used.
Does that clear it up?
Geggs
Subbing Angry Birds
Geggs Posted May 8, 2013
Spotted a typo:
"Niklas liked putting physics into games, and he want it in this one too."
That 'want' should probably be 'wanted'.
Geggs
Subbing Angry Birds
Geggs Posted May 8, 2013
Also:
"The black birds explode either they are tapped or when they come to rest."
Needs another when in there, I think. Making it:
"The black birds explode either when they are tapped or when they come to rest."
Actually that looks a bit clumsy. How about something simpler:
"The black birds explode when they are tapped or come to rest."
Geggs
Subbing Angry Birds
Lanzababy - Guide Editor Posted May 9, 2013
Thanks Geggs
Those have all been dealt with now.
I enjoyed editing this. I've made it 'pending' and one of the other GEs will give it a final proof read.
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