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Subbing the First Amendment
Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor Started conversation Apr 8, 2008
Hi Jordan 
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A couple of queries:
and if the incidential restriction = incidental? or burthened in his body and goods = burdened? Employment Divison = Division?
Subbing the First Amendment
J Posted Apr 8, 2008
Howdee
Those first two are both in quotes, and thus shouldn't be changed. Burthen and incidential are archaic (mis) spellings of those words
The last one is my mistake.
Subbing the First Amendment
Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor Posted Apr 8, 2008
Fixed
I have no suggestions to improve the content (
) (you'd have fainted if I had) so I'll just look for links 
Subbing the First Amendment
Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor Posted Apr 8, 2008
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Can you just confirm that sentence is correct?
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Can you give me another word in place of one of the "much"
There are four entries on "abolition of slavery" I would prefer your choice, if not I'll put one in: A22084661
Subbing the First Amendment
J Posted Apr 8, 2008
Just get rid of the second much. And that sentence is substantively correct
The abolition of slavery referred to in my entry is the US efforts to do so, while those entries refer to the campaign to abolish slavery in the UK. So they're really different subjects and I don't think a link in that context would be appropriate.
Subbing the First Amendment
Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor Posted Apr 8, 2008
Then I'm done, if you'd like to approve, I'll return to Eds
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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor Posted Apr 9, 2008
Great.
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