h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Hi sprout, I'm subbing your Leaving the EU options entry at A87734532

I've only added a few links and corrected some grammar, otherwise it's unchanged. Please have a look and tell me if there's anything that you think needs addressing.

Bel

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Hi

I spotted two little things:

"the UK mission would buzz around lobbying, friendly countries" - needs no comma here.

"2.Much legislation is finalised through standardisation" - missing a full stop.


I think that's it,

Thanks,

sprout

Done and returned.

Hello Sprout, next entry.

I've brushed up the Nepal update. One link was broken.

http://www.brigadeofgurkhas.co.uk/ replaced with http://www.army.mod.uk/gurkhas/history.aspx/

The only other alternative I was able to find was a wikipedia entry. I hope it is OK to link to the British army website, I'll ask Gnomon, though. Is the 'Update' bit supposed to remain in the title, do you know?

It's here, btw: A87738033

Hi - something odd has happened in the Kathmandu section (the word ndash!)

Also, can we add back in Rich's photo credit for the mountain - I couldn't copy and paste it across, for some reason.

I'm pretty sure it's OK to link to the British army website, and I'm also sure the update part should disappear when it's updated.

Thanks!

sprout

Uuups, it was missing an &.

I've added the photo credit, but that will only be visible once it gets edited status. Which reminds me: the original lists ausnahmsweise... as co-author but s/he isn't listed any more, is that correct, or should it be added?

Oops, forgot to add him. His sentence is still in there, but an 'additional contribution credit' would be a more appropriate way of adding it - they didn't exist at the time.

sprout

OK, I'll add that once I've found out how the exact credit is worded nowadays.