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Subediting "Supernatural"
Gnomon - time to move on Started conversation May 24, 2012
Hi Serephina!
I'm sub-editing your "Supernatural" entry at A87758194.
The following sentence appears to have got a bit confused:
"It is later strained, however, as we see Sam struggle to fight the demon blood is in his veins and stay human increase along with Dean's distrust in him."
What is it that is increasing along with Dean's distrust?
Subediting "Supernatural"
Gnomon - time to move on Posted May 24, 2012
I've finished editing this entry now. I thought about that sentence, and I think what you probably intended to say was:
"It is later strained, however, as we see Sam's struggles to fight the demon blood is in his veins and to stay human increase along with Dean's distrust in him."
I've gone with that, but if you meant something different, just give me a shout.
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