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Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences

Hi there-

As part of my continuing series on Little Eaton (okay, so it's only the second, but there will be more I promise smiley - smiley ) I have just written : A729560 Old Alice in the Bacon Box- The Little Eaton Hermit. Trouble is, I'm not happy with style, probably because it's based on something I wrote in school. I don't want to stick it in peer review yet, coz I want to be better first. I would appreciate any comments you might have. Feel free to tell me to b**ger off if you're busy, I'll just find someone else to annoy smiley - smiley


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Kaz

I will have a look, thanks for asking, I feel like a guru now!
Prabably won't be till this evening though - okay?


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Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences

No problem- thanks for taking a look!
Well, you're pretty much the first person I met on H2G2, even if we did get off to a shaky start smiley - biggrin

I'm only on myself in the evenings really- work takes a pretty dim view of using the internet for your own purposes smiley - sadface


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Kaz

sorry, lots came up, will definately look at it Thursday


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Kaz

Read the article and the ghosts one, and the one you referenced on Hounds. So I must have found it interesting! No problems with it at all, fully deserves to get into the edited guide.

One question, where is Little Eaton?


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Researcher U1025853

Wow, this person ended up hating me so much, but once even she liked me too.

I maybe a nasty waste of space now, but I was liked for a while, which is nice to know.


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Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences

Hey, what? Hmm? What on Earth makes you think I 'hate' you. I don't, and indeed never have. smiley - smiley

smiley - ale


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Researcher U1025853

I thought it was a safe assumption after I changed my account to get away from certain discussions about how I choose to get over childhood events.

Its cool to learn you don't hate me, but I feel we are very different and maybe its better leaving it at that.


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Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences

Course we're different. It gets bloody *dull* if people are all teh same.

smiley - ale


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