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Bernadette Lynn_ Home Educator

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Do you have any comments before I return this?


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Post 2

swl

Looks fine to me smiley - cheers


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Post 3

Rudest Elf


Sorry to butt in, butt:

3rd para 4th line: [well known]

5th para 3rd line: [while]

6th para 1st line: [While]

Please see A266131 'English Usage in the Edited Guide' - 'Hyphens', and 'Bits and Pieces' 9th dot (for 'whilst' smiley - cry ).

3rd para last sentence: [bear]

5th para 2nd line: [Joneses]


smiley - reindeer


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Post 4

swl

smiley - blush


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Post 5

Rudest Elf


I should hope so! smiley - biggrin

smiley - reindeer


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Post 6

Bernadette Lynn_ Home Educator

Thanks. I hope I'd have noticed those in my final sweep (but can't guarantee it) but you've saved me a lot of trouble.

I like whilst so I tend to have a blind spot for that - it always looks and reads right to me.


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Post 7

Bernadette Lynn_ Home Educator

OK now?


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Post 8

Rudest Elf


Looks good to me. smiley - smiley

smiley - reindeer


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Post 9

aka Bel - A87832164

FP today and what a phantastic blob! smiley - somersault

smiley - applausesmiley - spacesmiley - bubbly


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