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SashaQ - happysad Started conversation Oct 18, 2013
Hi Phoenician Trader
I'm your sub-editor for Buying a Carpet in Morocco. The new version is here A87809142 - please subscribe!
I enjoyed this! I have mainly just tweaked a few bits for House Style and added in links, although I did move the definitions of the three different types of rug higher up. I do have a few questions, as I am not familiar with Morocco at all:
What is a 'souk'?
"It is an impressive thing to watch." - Is 'it' the carpet-selling process in general?
Being a mathematician I was confused by "Carpets generally have 60, 80 or 100 knots per square inch: i.e. 8x8, 9x9 or 10x10." - actually 8x8=64 and 9x9=81
Am I right in thinking 100 Dihram is about 10 Euros?
I felt the Entry ended with a bit of an anticlimax, as it talks about bills. Would you like to add a sentence about being back home with your carpet, just to conclude?
Subbing Buying a Carpet in Morocco
Phoenician Trader Posted Oct 19, 2013
Thanks for the work you are doing. I am subbed.
Anyway, a Souk is a street based market district - but the streets are barely meters apart.
The "impressive thing to watch" is the carpet seller on the mountain treck path speaking so many languages.
Your mathematics is excellent, the carpets are a bit more wonky as they are hand made. It is also fair to note that not all of the carpet making world uses imperial measurements so there is some license used in the classification of carpets.
The official exchange rate is 11:1 but the street price is 10:1.
I will have a look as the last paragraph shortly - but I have to run right now.
Subbing Buying a Carpet in Morocco
SashaQ - happysad Posted Oct 23, 2013
Hi Phoenician Trader
Thanks for your message - I have made the further tweaks, so I hope it is OK for you as well.
Just the last paragraph to consider, and then it will be ready to go!
Subbing Buying a Carpet in Morocco
Lanzababy - Guide Editor Posted Nov 13, 2013
Glad to see you back on h2g2 Phoenician Trader. Am just nudging this Entry a bit, as I'd love to see it, and your other Moroccan Entry being approved as soon as we can manage it.
Did I see you say you have photos? We'd be thrilled if so, could you send them to the Artists? If they're very large images, send them as single attachments else they won't go through their letter box. We do like large size photos though, so we can crop them to our format.
Thanks so much, in anticipation!
Subbing Buying a Carpet in Morocco
Phoenician Trader Posted Nov 16, 2013
I notice that A87812265 is now being subbed.
If I can, I will write the final paragraph today and take that photograph.
Subbing Buying a Carpet in Morocco
SashaQ - happysad Posted Nov 28, 2013
I have added a paragraph to the end - feel free to suggest something different, though.
I will send it on its way tomorrow night.
Subbing Buying a Carpet in Morocco
Phoenician Trader Posted Nov 28, 2013
I am really not forgetting - I am writing full time at the moment and I have had to get my work to from an orderly queue!
I will have a look and let you know my thoughts.
Subbing Buying a Carpet in Morocco
SashaQ - happysad Posted Dec 2, 2013
I didn't send it off on Friday, after all, but I will send it off now so that the Editors can make their preparations.
When you have looked at the final paragraph, you can comment here and the Editors will sort out any changes for you.
Subbing Buying a Carpet in Morocco
Phoenician Trader Posted Dec 2, 2013
Will do. I did read it on Friday. I have a few hours today, so I will give it the attention it deserves.
Thank you so much for you patience in dealing with me!
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