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A note on the towel entry

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Shimoda

I'm sorry if this isn't the best place to put this, but your name is on the researcher list and the first one I came to that had recent activity.

This sentence is poorly joined up with the quote... I can't read it without having to stop on it. I think that, if any, the towel entry deserves to flow well.

It can be said that anyone "will think is that any man who can hitch the length and breadth of the [world], rough it,
slum it, struggle against terrible odds, win through, and still knows where his towel is, is clearly a man to be reckoned
with."

I would personally suggest: "It can be said that 'any man who can hitch...' "


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