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A87845845 - Melt away the blackness.
minorvogonpoet Posted Dec 28, 2014
I think the emotions come across as genuinely felt. 
But I think this would work better if we had a description of the beloved - I don't even know if it's a woman or a man! Let's see the person and their surroundings.
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