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A87834405 - What happens to your room while you are gone

Post 1

StarSeeker

Entry: What happens to your room while you are gone - A87834405
Author: StarSeeker - U15000431

I'm still trying to find a shorter title...


A87834405 - What happens to your room while you are gone

Post 2

minorvogonpoet

smiley - rofl I like this. It's not only funny but has the feel of beng well-observed. I suspect you are an older brother.

Mind you I would never try to use my son's bedroom for anything because I can hardly get through the door.

One or two nitpicks.
smiley - biro The sentence beginning 'Your mother got once' should be 'Your mother once got desperate and lent'.

smiley - biro The sentence beginning 'That's the clothes basket' should be 'That's because the clothes basket.'


A87834405 - What happens to your room while you are gone

Post 3

StarSeeker

Actually, I'm an older sister, and my mum is currently using my room to stash there everything from the living room, because she wants to repaint the wallssmiley - biggrin.

Thanks for 'nitpicks'.smiley - cheerup
I should work on my word order. I'm not quite sure where the 'there' in the sentence up there belongs.smiley - smiley

smiley - galaxy


A87834405 - What happens to your room while you are gone

Post 4

minorvogonpoet

Have you tried sending this to smiley - thepost? Dmitri might be glad to get it


A87834405 - What happens to your room while you are gone

Post 5

StarSeeker

smiley - huh Well, the idea never actually crossed my mind.smiley - shrug


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