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A87845845 - Melt away the blackness.

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Entry: Melt away the blackness. - A87845845
Author: benmayla - U13666723


A87845845 - Melt away the blackness.

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I think the emotions come across as genuinely felt. smiley - smiley

But I think this would work better if we had a description of the beloved - I don't even know if it's a woman or a man! Let's see the person and their surroundings.

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A87845845 - Melt away the blackness.

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