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A4771811 - Please Read!!!!

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spawn of grinch (leni) [foolette queenie of all fools]

Entry: Please Read!!!! - A4771811
Author: spawn of grinch (leni) [foolette queenie of all fools] - U1567318

someone told me to submit it here


A4771811 - Please Read!!!!

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Kat - From H2G2

Thank you for sharing this with us. I'm glad that things have turned out well for you all now. I know something of how hard it must have been for you all and respect you for being strong through it.

What would you like to do with this piece of writing? Improve it as writing? Just have people read it? Is it enough for you that you have written everything down and it's out now? Or would you like to look at it as a piece of writing and change technical points, content etc as if it was fiction or an essay?

Kat


A4771811 - Please Read!!!!

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spawn of grinch (leni) [foolette queenie of all fools]

I would like people to read it and tell what they think of the way it is written and what needs changing. I'm open for all suggestions towards it.

thanks


smiley - magic


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