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A66713925 - Necoc Yaotl

Post 1

Still_WRD

Entry: Necoc Yaotl - A66713925
Author: Still_WRD - U1665007

Here's an old one and an odd one. the name is another name for this diety: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tezcatlipoca
(Forgive my sojourn into wikipedia again)


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Post 2

Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor

I like the movement of this.smiley - smiley

I am confused by the line 'and earth Sat'.


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Post 3

Still_WRD

Confused in what way?


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Post 4

Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor

Does the capital letter indicate that the word Sat is a proper noun?

Is Earth sitting? Do you mean 'and Earth sat'?


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Post 5

Still_WRD

That's the only capital letter you're confused about? smiley - laugh It's meant to be chaotic in terms of capitalization, as in everything else.


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Post 6

minorvogonpoet

This is strange and striking. smiley - smiley

I particularly like 'time/is bitter/the Sun burns blue-black in hard Morning'.

I think people will come up with all sorts of meanings for the poem
but its very elusiveness is part of its stength.


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Post 7

aka Bel - A87832164

Sorry, I have nothing more constructive to say than that I really like it. smiley - smiley


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Post 8

Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor

Yes, I am confused about that capitalisation. It made the line meaningless to me - or rather, I thought it meant something entirely different.


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Post 9

Still_WRD

Isn't that kind of the point. All the capitalizations are meaningless. It's a rather nihilistic poem all through. I'm not trying to be argumentative, I'm just not sure why that particular word threw you off, as opposed to all the others.


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