h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Entry: 3 version of a poem - A4501630
Author: Blue Bird - U211101

Under the title: "Summer night" this poem was posted already in AWW.
But than for fun I saw that the verses are interchangable without changing the context.
It was fun and was amusing to me.
In the spirit of "Share and enjoy" here is for you too just for fun.

Finally: All this is about a painting what I painted some years ago. A nude female model is streching out on her back facing the silvery moon on the summer sky.
Because I wrote the poem in 3 version!Alas! I am not describing the painting.
If all goes well: I try to put the painting on a Web page to make this artwork combo compliete.
But don't expect too much too soon. Web making is new for me and takes longer than paint a picture or write a poem. Blue bird

How fun!

Isn't it cool when, suddenly, we get a look at something we've done in a whole new light. 'Seeing' this with the verses rotated must have been a sort of 'eureka!' moment.

For what it's worth, BB, (and it's admittedly not worth much!), I found the word 'mini' just a bit disconcerting. I know it's just a personal thing with me, but 'mini' always strikes me as... I don't know exactly... an 'advertising' word. If you were to employ me as your editor here, I believe I would lobby for replacing 'mini' with 'tiny'.

(Man, you would think I would just leave well enough alone!)

Did I mention this was fun and I enjoyed it?

Thanks for sharing.

m

By the way, BB... when you have a few spare minutes, take a look at A4162321 and the short discussion thread that accompanies it.

I think you might have some fun with it!


m

Erm, I like this.

Simple. Short. Says a lot without saying a lot.

Optic

Oh my Dear from Detroit! Thank you thank you very very much.
very happy that I got responses now and before!

You are right: Will change mini to tiny!! Thanks!

The entry about Love I know and read it and said something about it-- than.

Now try this:

http://www.geocities.com/giselanagy0026/MOONLIGHT.html

Just made a Web Page ( not my real name) so the painting is there in the Silver Moonlight.

Blue bird with her tiny
P.S. On my Personal Page as an update for July I also wrote this Web Page. I am just learning to make such a thing so the combo is compliete. Web page needs improvement!

Good start on the web page.

Great, BB! I like the painting very much!


m

Thank you to All very much.
Reply to m ( as your signature): I did make the change of "mini" to "tiny"

Hope it makes your self-confidence growing! somebody ( Bbird) is listening to you, because your suggestion is correct.
If you please: be my Editor! I am really a painter, though by an accident in a surgery I cannot paint as I used to. Since I try to write.

Reply to: Optic Nerve:
I have said before: You were, you are and will be a very inspiration with great impact: Simple short but a lot. ( Because of the fact that I am a peinter: = thousand words in a little painting.
Discover my English shortcomings as my "trademark"

Reply to Phred: thanks for your encouragement! On this Web page if I make the picture bigger will be better. They say:" Bigger is better" I shall try!
And thanks for the "Alaska" show! Beautiful sites.
This is a good start for a week-end with close to 100 F temp.:it's July. Bbird