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gorki - simply loves the word "amazing" Started conversation Dec 15, 2004
Entry: The Devil - A3112066
Author: gorki - simply loves the word "amazing" - U556962
There's a little devil in each of us...
A3112066 - The Devil
Apollyon - Grammar Fascist Posted Dec 20, 2004
Well written, very amusing. A couple of things...
1: It's spellt Lucifer, not Luzifer.
2: "she asked with a more curious voice as she actually was" --> Replace 'as' with 'than.'
A3112066 - The Devil
gorki - simply loves the word "amazing" Posted Dec 22, 2004
Well, thanks. I've just corrected them.
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