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A791057 - So What's With That Big Glowy Thingy In The Sky Anyway?
Intersturber (scout, but only on thursdays) Started conversation Jul 15, 2003
Entry: So What's With That Big Glowy Thingy In The Sky Anyway? - A791057
Author: Intersturber (scout, but only on thursdays) - U199002
I was just so happy to be part of the guide that this was the first thing I ever wrote here. I've never bothered actually posting it anywhere. Hmmm....
Well, what do you think?
A791057 - So What's With That Big Glowy Thingy In The Sky Anyway?
J Posted Jul 15, 2003
I think it's quite entertaining. It's a strange, silly perspective on something I thought was really boring. 
"When I say cool I don't mean light jacket weather" 
A791057 - So What's With That Big Glowy Thingy In The Sky Anyway?
a girl called Ben Posted Jul 17, 2003
I agree with Jodan, I enjoyed it more than I expected to.
The typos are annoying, and to be honest it could do with some editing. There are not now and never have been people on Mars for example, and there is a logical step missing in your explanation of sunspots.
It reads like a first draft, but it could be the first draft of something pretty good. 
Are you going to work on it? It is so nearly good that it deserves the final steps to make it excellent. This is a workshop, after all!
Thanks for posting it.
Ben
A791057 - So What's With That Big Glowy Thingy In The Sky Anyway?
J Posted Jul 18, 2003
No people on Mars? Yikes I have to make a few calls to the stock market!! 
A791057 - So What's With That Big Glowy Thingy In The Sky Anyway?
Intersturber (scout, but only on thursdays) Posted Jul 21, 2003
Yeah, it wasn't meant to be intensly correct or make sense or actually have an relevance whatsoever! But I'll fix it up after I stop resembling a chipmunk (just had all 4 wisdom teeth surgically removed)!
Cheers!
Intersturber 
A791057 - So What's With That Big Glowy Thingy In The Sky Anyway?
a girl called Ben Posted Jul 21, 2003
*hands Intersturber a 
on the grounds that it won't bite back when you eat it*
B
A791057 - So What's With That Big Glowy Thingy In The Sky Anyway?
Spynxxx Posted Jan 22, 2005
I'm thinking that more work is needed here, and the author has gone missing
a move would be in order here
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