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A6684898 - Grasses Elephant Combat On

Post 1

Kat - From H2G2

Entry: Grasses Elephant Combat On - A6684898
Author: Kat - Peer Review: Help Entries Into The Edited Guide! - U234368

This was originally put in the Writing Workshop, and then the author left.

Of the piece the author wrote:
"this is about the situation in Nigeria the leaders ruling the way they want it and the followers is stampled upon like those grasses that elephants battle upon"


A6684898 - Grasses Elephant Combat On

Post 2

J

I don't know much about the situation in Nigeria, but this really makes a whole lot more sense when you know it's a political commentary. smiley - smiley Seems pretty effective to me, too.

smiley - blacksheep


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Post 3

Kat - From H2G2

Should we perhaps put a quick bit at the top about it being a political thing? I don't know about the situation in Nigeria either


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Post 4

Kat - From H2G2

argh! There's no such smiley! It's...smiley - online2long?


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Post 5

J

I don't know, it certainly worked better for me after I learned it was a political thing smiley - ok

smiley - blacksheep (smiley - online2long as well.)


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