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A6684898 - Grasses Elephant Combat On
Kat - From H2G2 Started conversation Nov 4, 2005
Entry: Grasses Elephant Combat On - A6684898
Author: Kat - Peer Review: Help Entries Into The Edited Guide! - U234368
This was originally put in the Writing Workshop, and then the author left.
Of the piece the author wrote:
"this is about the situation in Nigeria the leaders ruling the way they want it and the followers is stampled upon like those grasses that elephants battle upon"
A6684898 - Grasses Elephant Combat On
J Posted Nov 6, 2005
I don't know much about the situation in Nigeria, but this really makes a whole lot more sense when you know it's a political commentary. Seems pretty effective to me, too.
A6684898 - Grasses Elephant Combat On
Kat - From H2G2 Posted Nov 6, 2005
Should we perhaps put a quick bit at the top about it being a political thing? I don't know about the situation in Nigeria either
A6684898 - Grasses Elephant Combat On
J Posted Nov 6, 2005
I don't know, it certainly worked better for me after I learned it was a political thing
( as well.)
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