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A59521089 - Ghost Shouter

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Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor

Entry: Ghost Shouter - A59521089
Author: Dmitri Gheorgheni - One-eyed in the Kingdom of the Blind, these days - U1590784

Caused by an overdose of a popular television series here in the US.

The heroine of that show is lovely, gracious, and patient. This inspired me to wonder what might happen if...


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minorvogonpoet

I can believe that the ability to communciate with ghosts would be rather a nuisance. smiley - laugh

I particularly liked the psychiatrist - the Freudian with a mother problem! And the young ghost is beliveably selfish and shallow.

You're wise to suggest that her journey to the Light is a positive thing. Otherwise, her death would be tragic, while you need to keep the tone light. Delicately done.


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Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor

smiley - laugh Thanks, MVP.


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aka Bel - A87832164

Very funny story, this. smiley - smiley I enjoyed reading it. I've never watched that series, I've only seen 'Sam'.


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Terran

And now its in smiley - thepostsmiley - ok


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Nosebagbadger {Ace}

excellent piece, well donesmiley - ok


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Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor

Thanks.smiley - smiley The ghosts thank you (Vain lot, they are).


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Pheroneous II

Enjoyed immensely. Thanks.


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