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A54441434 - It's All In The Mind

Post 1

Opticalillusion- media mynx life would be boring without hiccups

Entry: It's All In The Mind - A54441434
Author: Opticalillusion- media mynx life would be boring without hiccups - U231227

How my mind worked (or failed to) when we were on the h2g2 meet in London this year. smiley - blush


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minorvogonpoet

Signposts linked to the internet? Sounds interesting if a bit scary.
This piece links nicely to the current Stretcher challenge about 'What I'd really love to have if anyone had had the sense to make it.'

Though there are times when you just don't want any more information. smiley - headhurts

The sentence beginning "So now you know my stance" needs to have a dash or colon after 'scene'. You later need to say "but are linked to the internet."

The sentence beginning "At this point" could do with being split up.


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Opticalillusion- media mynx life would be boring without hiccups

Hi minorvogonpoet smiley - biggrin indeed that is my intention.

I understand the idea of having too much information and what a lack of it can do too. smiley - headhurts

smiley - ta for correcting my grammar smiley - biro



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Post 4

LL Waz

Signposts linked to the internet! smiley - cool

And the next step is signposts that watch whether you paid attention to the directions...

And then signposts that yell after you "Oi! You! Yes you! I said LEFT not right. Can't you read simple directions?!"

And then signposts with legs that take you by the arm, "Now come along deary, it's this way..."

And then signposts putting themselves up for Government. Afterall, who better to know the right direction to take the country...

Sorry Optical illusion, I'm getting carried away, I'll get my coat. Thank you for the read and the diversion smiley - smiley


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Post 5

Opticalillusion- media mynx life would be boring without hiccups

Sounds very Alice in Wonderland smiley - laugh


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Post 6

minorvogonpoet

I think the signposts could easily carry CCTV cameras.

More Big Brother than Alice in Wonderland.


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Opticalillusion- media mynx life would be boring without hiccups

smiley - smiley


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