h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Entry: Light and Grasping - A2165825
Author: sonimhta - U551438

Spotlights and nazis (the nazi part was just to attract or detract your attention, whichever it may feel like doing at the moment... please stop staring... if you must insist, than read the damn thing... I mean, you've wasted this much time...)

Good read, but would scan better with a little guideML thrown in randomly for the hell of it. Love the explanations of 'spotlight' there at the end.

It has now been LARGELY re-written. To its aid or ailment, I'll let you all decide. But... please decide?
(the nazi thing is still in there, most of it was deleted, most of what was deleted was the first two thirds, they were weak, they knew they had it in for them from the beggining).

Still a good read, and still would benefit from the random use of GML. Still like the explanation of spotlight there at the end. Seems to be missing something, it's easier to follow. One of the things that made it fun to read was that it seemingly poked fun at the way some people try to overexplain everything (like I am now), reminicent of Cliff the Postman from 'Cheers'.

I still like it.