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A14190617 - Sonnet 3
U1250369 Posted Sep 8, 2006
Wonderful, Ian.
I especially liked the rhythm of:
My eulogy for you was raw pain. I
learned lines for you, committed crimes for you
desperately acted out my time for you
in search for love’s approval in your eyes.
A14190617 - Sonnet 3
ianhimself Posted Sep 8, 2006
it's probably my favourite thing that i've ever written ... poem or prose.... because it perfectly captures what i wanted to say ....
A14190617 - Sonnet 3
ianhimself Posted Sep 8, 2006
there's a reason whjy i put it iup last night ..... but that's too complicated to go into here
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U1250369 Posted Sep 8, 2006
I hate it when people say that.
Curiouser and curiouser. But, I'll leave you now, man of mystery
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