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A14190572 - Sonnet 2
ianhimself Started conversation Sep 7, 2006
Entry: Sonnet 2 - A14190572
Author: ianhimself - U5477852
Experimantal sonnetry .... maybe even precociously self indulgent ... i don't know.... but i love the science/mystery debate.... and this is an attempt to picture it in words
you have to read it aloud to make it scan.... but the iambic pentameter holds and i think it's ok as Shakespearean
but feel free to tell me it's not!
A14190572 - Sonnet 2
U1250369 Posted Sep 8, 2006
Yes, it was good.
The last two lines caused me to laugh. Was I wrong ?
A14190572 - Sonnet 2
ianhimself Posted Sep 8, 2006
nope ..... you were right
the point is, i think, that neitzche can think all he wants to think about the absence of mystery.... but all of his sophisticated thought can be undone by the whiff of perfume wafting over from a beautiful woman .... and that baccus and aphrodite et al don;t need a modernist philosopher's thesis to justify (or otherwise) their existence
to mystery
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U1250369 Posted Sep 8, 2006
You are very funny 
You Irish can drink with the best of them
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