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A14051440 - The Chance of my life.
ianhimself Started conversation Sep 1, 2006
Entry: The Chance of my life. - A14051440
Author: ianhimself - U5477852
there was a guy at my primary school ... and i thought of him some 40 years later .... and this fiction is how i think he might have lived his life..... or he might be a bus driver ... or a lawyer ... how would i know?
all thoughts much appreciated
thanks
A14051440 - The Chance of my life.
LL Waz Posted Oct 1, 2006
I enjoyed that too. You tell a good tale. And it has a point to it.
For constructive comments, mine would be something vague about having a general impression that this one isn't as tight as some of your others. My attention certainly didn't wander, but I wasn't as absorbed as with 'wick end of candles' or 'I let something show too'.
Decision by dice isn't for me. I can take chances - but I won't leave them up to the randomness of a dice throw .
Besides, see this A601110? That's me at the top of the 'Hall of Fame' for getting it wrong. 6 for 6 wrong.
Waz
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