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A14051440 - The Chance of my life.

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ianhimself

Entry: The Chance of my life. - A14051440
Author: ianhimself - U5477852

there was a guy at my primary school ... and i thought of him some 40 years later .... and this fiction is how i think he might have lived his life..... or he might be a bus driver ... or a lawyer ... how would i know?

all thoughts much appreciated

thanks


A14051440 - The Chance of my life.

Post 2

U1250369


Fantastic !

Pin will be along later to add something constructivesmiley - laugh


A14051440 - The Chance of my life.

Post 3

LL Waz

smiley - smiley I enjoyed that too. You tell a good tale. And it has a point to it.


For constructive comments, mine would be something vague about having a general impression that this one isn't as tight as some of your others. My attention certainly didn't wander, but I wasn't as absorbed as with 'wick end of candles' or 'I let something show too'.


Decision by dice isn't for me. I can take chances - but I won't leave them up to the randomness of a dice throw smiley - winkeye.

Besides, see this A601110? That's me at the top of the 'Hall of Fame' for getting it wrong. 6 for 6 wrong.

Waz





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