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sibford Posted Jun 16, 2006
Hi !! I've just read your poem I think it is one of the best poems that I have read. The feelings of loneliness while not being alone and the trapped feeling,the way you portray this is amazing. I really enjoyed this poem, thankyou Best wishes Sib
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Still_WRD Posted Jun 19, 2006
Thank you very much.
And my computer should be lynched because it will not allow me to see My Space correctly. It shows it as it was the last time I logged in, and won't let me see new posts until I've posted, which makes it hard to know what I'm responding to.
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Still_WRD Posted Sep 22, 2006
hELLO, ANYONE WHO'S STILL PAYING ATTENTION. oOPS, i'VE LEFT THE cAPS lOCK ON!
That's better.
Anyway, I've been going through and reformatting all my old stuff, now that I know a bit more about Guide ML. I had originally intended to leave this as a prose-poem, but I tinkered with it, and I think that this form actully accentuates the meaning of it, makes it read the way I want it too. It was too flat before.
What I'm trying to say is: Do you like it this way? Do you agree?
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