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Still_WRD

Entry: Left - A11690372
Author: Still_WRD - U1665007

Bit of old stuff.


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U1250369


But all the same, good old stuff

Thanks !


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Post 3

Still_WRD

Thank YOU.


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Post 4

cupati

Likey!


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Post 5

Still_WRD

My computor is stupid and should be lynched.


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U1250369

Why's that then


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sibford

Hi !! I've just read your poem I think it is one of the best poems that I have read. The feelings of loneliness while not being alone and the trapped feeling,the way you portray this is amazing. I really enjoyed this poem, thankyou Best wishes Sib


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Still_WRD

Thank you very much.

And my computer should be lynched because it will not allow me to see My Space correctly. It shows it as it was the last time I logged in, and won't let me see new posts until I've posted, which makes it hard to know what I'm responding to.


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U1250369

My sympathies.....


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Still_WRD

hELLO, ANYONE WHO'S STILL PAYING ATTENTION. oOPS, i'VE LEFT THE cAPS lOCK ON!

That's better.

Anyway, I've been going through and reformatting all my old stuff, now that I know a bit more about Guide ML. I had originally intended to leave this as a prose-poem, but I tinkered with it, and I think that this form actully accentuates the meaning of it, makes it read the way I want it too. It was too flat before.

smiley - ermWhat I'm trying to say is: Do you like it this way? Do you agree?


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