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A1067014 - another poem
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Entry: another poem - A1067014
Author: Normal - U229204
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A1067014 - another poem
a girl called Ben Posted Jul 16, 2003
Damn! Poetry, and the author hasn't posted here for four weeks.
Normal - if you ever come back, let us know by posting in one of these threads.
I like the stillness of this poem; it is what it says, which is one of the reasons it works. And I also like the neutrality and non-judgementalism of it. Is it neutrality, or is it despair?
Thank you for writing it, and I hope you come back sometime and find out that people have read it and commented on it.
B
A1067014 - another poem
nadia Posted Jan 3, 2004
Normal's been gone a while. Shame, I like this. I like the ambiguity though I read it as apathy rather than dispair.
A nice brain hook.
Thank you for posting it Normal (should you ever return and read this).
Speckly.
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