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Peer Review: A837245 - SCUBA
Stuart Started conversation Sep 25, 2002
Entry: SCUBA - A837245
Author: Stuart - U199978
An explanation of how the Regulator on SCUBA equipment works.
Stuart
A837245 - SCUBA
There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho Posted Sep 25, 2002
An excellent explanation of how the regulator works Stuart, but if that's all the entry is going to be, I think you need to change the title to reflect that it doesn't comprehensively cover all aspects of SCUBA 
A837245 - SCUBA
Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese Posted Sep 25, 2002
The 'Two Stage Regu(a)lators' section is half in present tense and half in past 
You can link to these existing entries:
A242524 Scuba Diving
A315857 Scuba Equipment
A680942 Pressure (this is the original, the edited copy will be out there soon)
'Exhaust gasses where vented' - 'were'
Then change the title to something more precise and ... 
A837245 - SCUBA
Stuart Posted Sep 25, 2002
Many thanks Gosho. I have changed the title. Hope this makes it more clear.
Regards
Stuart
A837245 - SCUBA
Stuart Posted Sep 25, 2002
Hi Sir Bossel,
I have changed the title. Hope it makes more sense. I think I have got all the tenses right. Got a bit confused going between the past tense of Single Stage Regulators and the present tense of Two Stage Regulators.
I'll link to the article on pressure when the Edited version is available. The other two articles are a bit to American orientated for my liking. A lot of the information has no relevance in the UK.
Regards
Stuart
A837245 - SCUBA
Stuart Posted Oct 1, 2002
Just giving it a little nudge. Seeems to have got itself lost.
Stuart
A837245 - SCUBA
Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese Posted Oct 1, 2002
Hey, it's still a day left before it's seven days in PR and pickable.
In the meantime you may change 'containes' into contains and have a 
A837245 - SCUBA
Stuart Posted Oct 1, 2002
Thanks Sir Bossel,
Corection noted. I've just had a couple or three and very good they were too.
Stuart
A837245 - SCUBA
Tango Posted Oct 1, 2002
Great article, just needs to wait for the 7 days to be up...
Tango
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Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese Posted Oct 3, 2002
and congratulations!
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Emily...overly fond of the ellipsis...and top ten lists...submit yours @ A87824361... Posted Oct 7, 2002
Hi all, good place to start when editing entries
Will try and do the entry proud
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There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho Posted Oct 7, 2002
Well done Stuart
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Stuart Posted Oct 8, 2002
Many thanks Gosho,
Stuart
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Peer Review: A837245 - SCUBA
- 1: Stuart (Sep 25, 2002)
- 2: There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho (Sep 25, 2002)
- 3: Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese (Sep 25, 2002)
- 4: Stuart (Sep 25, 2002)
- 5: Stuart (Sep 25, 2002)
- 6: Stuart (Oct 1, 2002)
- 7: Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese (Oct 1, 2002)
- 8: Stuart (Oct 1, 2002)
- 9: Tango (Oct 1, 2002)
- 10: Sam (Oct 3, 2002)
- 11: h2g2 auto-messages (Oct 3, 2002)
- 12: Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese (Oct 3, 2002)
- 13: Emily...overly fond of the ellipsis...and top ten lists...submit yours @ A87824361... (Oct 7, 2002)
- 14: There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho (Oct 7, 2002)
- 15: Stuart (Oct 8, 2002)
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