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Skankyrich [?] Posted Feb 20, 2008
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'And why do you continue the route from Ravenglass beyond the wall to Neatherby and Broomholm? What has this got to do with the Western Coastal Defences? You seem to be walking around in circles and covering the same ground over again. These forts are described elsewhere.
This was to show the full route north of the wall. If it is repetition please delete.'
Which section(s) should I delete, Bob? The alternative would be to say that the Entry describes an additional walk, but you'll need to write me a couple of lines to explain that.
'Total so far 53 miles. You have now completed this section of your journey: You travelled 51 miles. ... there's something wrong here. Is it 51 or 53?' - you didn't answer this either!
I've caught up on the rest now, thanks PP
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Fizzymouse- no place like home Posted Feb 21, 2008
I just have one question .... and if it's a stupid one just ignore it
Was Wallsend called Wallsend before the wall.
It just strikes me as a little strange that they'd build a wall from Wallsend - was there a previous wall or was it called something else until the wall.
I'm getting confused now ...
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bobstafford Posted Feb 21, 2008
Hi Fizzy
Walls end is a modernish name for a town at the end of the wall.
It took no notice of the history of the wall just borrowed the name
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bobstafford Posted Feb 21, 2008
53 please Skankyrich
This is a journey of 51 miles that is often excluded <>
and after Ravenglass as spotted
You have now completed this section of your journey: You travelled 51 miles.
Which section(s) should I delete, Bob? The alternative would be to say that the Entry describes an additional walk, but you'll need to write me a couple of lines to explain that.
Is the sort of thing you had in mind?
For clarity the next section of the journey is included to show the terminus of the road from the port of Ravenglass.
PS Did you have a good holiday
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Skankyrich [?] Posted Feb 22, 2008
It now says:
'This is a journey of 53 miles that is often excluded from the total length of Hadrian's Wall. This Entry actually describes two routes; the walk along the western coastal defences, and the continuation from Ravenglass to Broomholm, north of Hadrian's Wall itself.
The Romans were aware of the possibility of a seaborne attack...'
Is that ok? I think that deals with PP's point a little more effectively
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The Punctuation Police Posted Feb 22, 2008
Skankyrich, if you plotted the routes on a map you would see the point we were trying to make. To put it in Devon terms, what you have written is like saying:
"This Entry actually describes two routes; the walk along the coast from Torquay to Weymouth, and the continuation from Weymouth to Exeter and Launceston beyond the Cornish Border itself."
(Apologies to Bob who is not from Devon, but you know what you have written.)
The second walk is not a continuation. It is going back on your tracks, crossing the wall and going on into Scotland.
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Skankyrich [?] Posted Feb 22, 2008
Yes, I understood your point (Weymouth is in Dorset, but never mind ) - but the forts Bob describes in that section aren't all 'described elsewhere' as you say, so I'd prefer to keep it in if possible. It seems a shame to just chop it all out and lose it. How about losing the 'Coastal' from the title? 'The Western Defences' seems to sum it up better.
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The Punctuation Police Posted Feb 22, 2008
You could say something like:
This Entry describes three routes: one goes from Ravenglass on the estuaries of the rivers Esk, Mite and Irt along the coast taking in the coastal defences. The second route also starts at Ravenglass but travels inland, across mountainous country. This was the supply route for Roman forts on the wall. This route reaches the wall at Carlisle. The third route goes from Carlisle north of the wall into frontier country, visiting the Roman forts of whatever. For your convenience, the routes will be described here starting at the end of the wall, going along the coast and returning to the wall via the mountain route. This allows an interested walker to take all the routes in one (long) round trip.
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Skankyrich [?] Posted Feb 22, 2008
PP, what do you think about my suggestion a title change?
Just to serve notice, I plan to remove this from review on Monday if all points have been addressed at that point
A30525022 - 'University Project Page - Hadrian's Wall'
bobstafford Posted Feb 22, 2008
PP, what do you think about my suggestion a title change?
Yes remove the ref to the coast, it is a sound suggestion.
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Skankyrich [?] Posted Feb 26, 2008
You may notice, Bob, that this thread isn't in PR any more. It's been moved back to the project page.
Yep, it's gone in-house - well done!
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