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Writing Workshop: A722684 - The Perfect Italian-Style Tomato Sauce
annie the great Started conversation Apr 5, 2002
Entry: The Perfect Italian-Style Tomato Sauce - A722684
Author: annie the great - U190241
I know this isn't finished but i would like some comments on it, please.
Annie 
A722684 - The Perfect Italian-Style Tomato Sauce
Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese Posted Apr 5, 2002
Hi!
I tend to disagree ---- on the 'not being finished' part 
You ought to replace the first person in the first sentence with "this researcher's other recipes" (because Edited Entries are, apart from very few exceptions like 'my experience with cancer', written in third person throughout), and you *could* use the Ordered List tag for the method part, but that's about it.
On a very personal note, I'd say you cannot possibly have enough garlic in a recipe whatsoever
To sum it up: see you over at Peer Review!
Bossel (Scout)
A722684 - The Perfect Italian-Style Tomato Sauce
annie the great Posted Apr 6, 2002
Thanks for the comment about garlic - I usually put about a clove of garlic per person in food that has garlic normally. I was going to work out some links to put in, and I will change the first paragraph to third person but that is about it.
Annie
A722684 - The Perfect Italian-Style Tomato Sauce
annie the great Posted Apr 10, 2002
Hey, Bossel
I need some support over in Peer Review for my entry 'The Perfect Italian-Style Tomato Sauce'.
Annie
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