h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Im finishing off A8658525

Can anyone suggest anything else I can add?

Typos:
come under the this banner >>>> drop the the
highly recommended most fans >>> by most fans
jump and/ or scream >>>> jump and/or scream
particularly tense moment!Sound >>> ! Sound

... and maybe spread out your last section a bit more, with line breaks before the different paragraphs?

Great stuff - never played a scary game before as I find them too stressful and I'm too blessed [cowardly] to be stressed I really enjoyed reading this, Serephina, I hope my comments are useful.
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Your comments are always useful Wilma I can rarely spot my own typos!

No line breaks, please chaps! We don't use tags in the edited guide; use tags around each section instead.

It's also really helpful to the sub if you do the paragraphs like this:


Blahdeblah. Blumbedumblenumb. Tweed.



Next lot of drumblenoggin.


It just spreads it out so it's easy to find.

Course, these are just tips rather than me insisting on anything

Of course what you think now?

Maybe on the sound section, recommend using if possible headphones.

They make them(especially PC games) far more scary!

Cool, will do..

Done

Anything else? or shall i pop it back over to peer review?

I would if I were you! Looks great, but it's not my specialised subject

Ahh but like you said its how it reads that counts