h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Entry: BRAM STOKERS DRACULA MY VIEW PART 4 - A711406
Author: JASMIN - U185809

i really must watch my typing

Hi, Jasmin!

I see that this is the fifth entry you have put into Peer Review. If you read the Guidelines,
http://www.bbc.co.uk/dna/h2g2/EditedGuide-Guidelines

which Zarquon's Singing Fish already asked you to do, you would see that entries in Peer Review are supposed to be finished. None of your entries is finished yet.

People here are very willing to comment on entries and suggest improvements, but they will expect you to do the basic work first. If you are serious about getting an entry into the Edited Guide, I suggest you do the following:

First, take your entries out of Peer Review for the moment. To do this, click on the Peer Review banner on the top of any page. You will see a list of entries. Your ones will have the word Remove beside them. Click on this Remove link for each of your entries.

Secondly, tidy up the spelling, punctuation and spacing. To do this, click on the Edit Entry button at the side of the page when you are looking at one of your entries. (This is just underneath the Submit for Review button which you have obviously found already.) You can then add spaces, break the text into proper sentences and so on. When you have done this, clicking the Update Entry button will put all the improvements into your entry.

Thirdly, for the Dracula entries, copy and paste all the text from parts 2, 3 and 4 into part one (while you are editing part 1) to make a single entry. Then try and organise the text under a few headings to make your points more clearly.

At that stage, it would be worth putting the entry into the Writing Workshop to get general comments.

You don't have to do all this, though - plenty of people get great enjoyment out of the Guide without ever putting entries into Peer Review. You obviously have a lively mind and plenty of opinions - if you click on the Talk button (at the top or at the side of the page) you should be able to find the Ask the h2g2 Community page, where there are always plenty of discussions going on. Enjoy yourself!


Azara

how do i cut and paste using a telewest keyboard

i dont know sweetie, but if you cant figure it out then it might be worth checking if your local library has public internet acess.

FABT

If you've looked through the instructions, how about e-mailing telewest or checking there website. That's all I can think to do (apart from the local library thing).

Researcher PSG